Be Concise, Boil it Down, Boil it Down, and Biol it Down Again

• Make every word count. Omit words not needed or "empty" words at beginning of title.

       Wordy        The Preliminary Studies of Secondary Production in ……

       Concise      Secondary Productivity…..

       Wordy        Some Notes on the Effects of Ambient Temperature on….

       Concise      Effects of Ambient Temperature on….

• Replace wordy phrases with shorter phrases or single words.

Wordy        Why Felids Copulate So Much: One Possible Model for

                   the Evolution of Copulation Frequency in Domestic Cats

Concise       An Evolutionary Model for High Copulation Frequency in

                   Felidae

 

       Wordy        Some Studies on the Reproductive Biology of May Flies

                         Including Sperm Transfer, Sperm Storage, and Sperm

                         Utilization

       Concise      Sperm Dynamics in Haxagenid May Flies

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